Hi guys, thank you for the great work. The arguments on the map look good to me.
I left quite a few notes with minor changes and proposed some alternatives to some streamlines (I think the one on the left is superficial and I am not sure if it works better than what it is already there, the two on the right are better in terms of logic relations in my opinion).
I also think we should find a copremise for every reason presented, to make the map structure stronger.
Please take a look and evaluate my proposals, then we can discuss everything in our call on Tuesday. Also, let me know what you think even before tuesday :)